Wednesday, April 21, 2010

OA Bumper

Hey guys,

Here's a bumper for Old Arizona. The look is supposed to be kind of DIY/GIRL POWER. I was wondering if the text is clearly readable? I know the type looks kind of stretched and wonky, but we'll fix it for sure. We just need a couple of extra set of eyes to make sure things are legible.

2 comments:

  1. this looks fantastic -- the white and yellow type gets a little hard to read in the early shots with the girls. i'd suggest placing a feathered out black box transparency (10-15% maybe?) behind it to bring it out more.

    gl

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